For a PIM the imagery is amazing! One of these days I'll actually write something sesible from that damn contest! Great job you've done with yours though, I like it!

Reviewed by Christina29

Empty Coffins PIM 7-27-05

use your own imagery

Empty coffins following
Vampires stabbed in the heart
Dagger searing jaggedly
raging pain, dreaming of love

Wow - is the word that comes to mind. The last line seems so appropriate to the rest of the poem I am very impressed. Clara

Reviewed by Clarabow

Accumulated Desire PIM 7-25-05

imagine this your self

Accumulated ill- fated dark skyscrapers
climb unreached destinations
return wet paint,colored
with drips end desire

Well.....You got me on this one!!You are tooo cool! I really love what you have written.I neeed to get back to doing these poems.Thank-you so much for sharing it.Your friend,BonnieBlue.

Reviewed by BonnieBlue

what a wonderful poem and so well done little sentences with a powerful punch, you did great on this one too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Laurel46

Unseen Winds PIM 7-24-05

own imagery in htis one

Unseen thread crouching
rapped silky in desire
Hollow storm hushened wings
love whistle the soft winds

This is a great PIM. Very good imagery in this one. I think this is a really great way to loosen up and let the imagination go.

Reviewed by NappierSN

great pim sweetie your great at these poems, thank you for sharing this poem.......mike amsbary

Reviewed by ams 1

Impossibly Identity PIM 7-21-05

Impossible idenity removed
through precious newspaper clippings
intricate piece of life photographs
decifer chants faded

your poetry is always so much fun - there is always mystery, sensuality and great feeling
this one is mysterius and allows the reader to wonder - the game is afoot - Peter

Reviewed by pshea
Thank you for sharing Impossibly Identity. PIM is a difficult medium and you met the criteria using the words of a limited bank. Your PIM creates the same mood, I think, of my Whose Identity of the same day and I am pleased to have read yours.

Reviewed by druid65

Oceanic Whispers 7-10-05 PIm

Draws your conclusions

Oceanic whipsers filled with lightening
moon shadows found castaways
weeping , mourning drunkin sea
dead in the sand

This if a true masterpiece of mystical poetry dear Michelle. Particularly "shadows found castaways" is the pearl of the poem.


Reviewed by horatius


 very good poem filled with strong imagery, pims are hard to do but you did great here, may Godbless your inspirations...ti:)

Reviewed by tikat

THERE'S LOTA OF DIFFERENT CONCLUSIONS YOU CAN DRAW FROM THESE LINES, AND I THINK I KNOW ABOUT HALF A DOZEN OF THEM..MIKE AMSBARY

Reviewed by ams 1

Tears 7-9-05

pim: use your imagery skills

Across burnt highland hills
eyes wailed,
tears cried,
Hearts stood pierced, twisted,
As wretched officer lashed poor tenants

WOW what imagery and intense action here you have done truely well in this pim painting a complete vision with your few words...godbless you and your visions...ti:)

Reviewed by tikat

Five words have probably never said so much! I think of the ghetto or a city project and a young mother having to leave their place because of politics or the like?

Reviewed by tangr

very good use of limited words - i can never manage P I M so i applaud anyone who can - this was excellent - imagery, story and a great read!

Reviewed by lucypaloma


You are tooo cool!!!This is a wonderful PIM poem!!I see you have quickly become a master!!I missed a whole week but I am able to do them now.Thank-you for sharing this vivid poem through your imagery.Your friend,BonnieBlue.

Reviewed by BonnieBlue

Countless End PIM 7-8-05

Countless dark hastens tenacoiusly
unwavering attentiveness relic
broken inescapable sombering end

A great Poetry in motion poem and seems to reflect on the darkness felt by someone's
unattentiveness and can't seem to escape to a happy end.


Reviewed by beauty_inheart

'sombering end'- that phrase gave me chills. Wonderfully pieced together PIM, as always friend... A haunting and dark air this piece has, but beautiful in an eerie kind of way. Well done as always...

Reviewed by apieceofme

Countless dark hastens" is an excellent metonymy, and in general the verse very impressively transfers emotional acumen. Even complicate imagery somehow obfuscates and makes more intense the emotional tension.




Reviewed by horatius

Mothers Sillouettes 7-7-05 PIM

Mothers restless hunger
reflection-substenance
she drives the roaring highway
Reconized undeciphered Acceptance
No path mirrors her silhouettes

This is a lovley poetry in motion poem. you have a good word flow, emotion and imagery here. well done. Would you read one of mine please?
5 stars

Reviewed by crj147

WOW!!I see you have gotten the hang of it!I told you.This is a wonderful poem for the selection you hasd to chose from.Thank-you for the enjoyable read and for sharing it.Your friend,BonnieBlue.

Reviewed by BonnieBlue

Reflections Between The Wind PIM 7-7-05

poetry in motion use your own imagery

Reflections-substance Taunt sometimes
Acceptance reconized mirrors sillouettes
undeciphered soft balances of sound
desired love naked between the wind

great sensual and emotional imagery here... loved
the motions as I read through.. what a great talent
you have.. what great patience you have.. what great
teeth you have...no wait..that's from another
story..LOL!

Reviewed by alisajs

These things can be difficult, but you did extremely well. I Had alot of imagery for
this one. Well done....Bravo!!!

Reviewed by arandasmth

you are so good at these your pim poems always make sense and i admire you for that
i'm gonna have to take lessons from you on how to do this...mike amsbary

Mother nature 7/05/05 PIM

Mother nature extending scattered patterns
ensemble crest in surreal nature
Beachnut revealed serene white Dolphin

I just hope I be the 1st one on this it is so sweet. you got alot of tallent to do this.
Just hope you get my stars oveve the network!
xoxoxxoxox

Reviewed by ilovecatsokd

Seems surealistic, however after deep pondering appears fascinating wisdom, something like Neoplatonic emanation and multiplication of light from the Supreme One and reaturning back to One.

Reviewed by horatius

Whisper Brillance PIM 7-5-05

poetry in motion you know the deal

Whisper brillance colors
destruction shattered madness
Dancing dreams parade desire

OKay, now I get it....Think of sexy things when writing the PIM's and they will come out this good. lol job well done, now all you need to do is be lucky enough to get them in with the clock.

Reviewed by CaptPerry
A great PIM and one that teases the reader. So many different ways this can be taken. good job. I liked it very much.

Reviewed by gungalo
Thoughts PIM 7-4-05

another simple thought

thoughts given her pleasure
she felt love
warming embracing shadows
she found heaven
WOW! Chills run all over my body reading this one. Short yet so incredible. I have trouble finding any heaven these days.Read some of my work, you'll see why. Yet this piece was very toching to me.

Reviewed by irabostian

I find a quiet love in this piece, but something about it echoes lonliness as well. A brilliantly pieced together PIM, one filled with a deep meaning, a message I can relate to vividly.... Wonderfully written, so much said in so few words... Well done my friend, I am glad I have found you...

Reviewed by apieceofme

Pleasure Love PIM 7-4-05

just simple thoughts

Pleasure moment was willing
pear-shaped breast, body bare
shadows warming embrace
breeze awakened love

You made this so sexy. I love pear-shaped breast. you did good on this.I can go to sleep on them to? Just kidding!

Reviewed by ilovecatsokd
O, after such an exquisite poem I am not sure that the pleasure is just for a moment but not for ever.

Reviewed by horatius
We are moving, where our angel-muses us leading,
And whole day till night Holy Bible we are reading;
In night – connecting to Internet
We lovely love 8 hours with you spend,
In breaks – we are creating poems – according to the Art:
To share with you, to open to you the deeps of our heart.


Reviewed by Eclect

This one is nice.. sensual without too much.. over the top.. graphic..words. nicely done.. great talent.. thank you for sharing your talent with us out here.... very nicely done..

Reviewed by alisajs
These simple thoughts leave us with a breathtaking moment of the appreciation of love and our body. The image is very sexy, but not over the top.

Reviewed by CaptPerry